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Charlie’s Choice
Weekly Tips to Help You Write
Publish & Promote Your Work
April 23, 2008
PUT WORDS INTO YOUR CHARACTERS’ MOUTHS
THAT BRING THEM TO LIFE
Few devices can reveal more about your characters or breath more life into them than dialogue. Their choice of words, accent, body talk as they speak, indeed every aspect of their speech offers the reader further insight into their persona. Unfortunately, many writers, particularly novices, find creating dialogue the most difficult aspect of writing fiction.
It doesn’t have to be that way. Writing dialogue can be your most enjoyable exercise when crafting your novel. Listen to what author Elizabeth Rose says in an article on the web site Scribes World: “My favorite part of writing, believe it or not, is the dialogue. While many authors may feel this is a challenging aspect in their novel, I instead look forward to the dialogue as I let my characters write the book themselves. Personally, I think dialogue can make or break a story.”
Just Write It
The first and most important piece of advice I can give you is to let it flow. More than any other part of a novel, dialogue must seem natural. It must, as the great Bard said, flow “trippingly off the tongue.” When you write initially, don’t try and control your dialogue. Let it control you. You can always go back and polish it. Letting it flow easily provides the spontaneity that quality speech demands.
Some authors like to speak the lines as they write them. Others prefer to voice them when they return to edit the conversation. Whichever your preference, the best way to test your dialogue is to speak the words out loud to determine whether the conversation flows naturally and reflects the essence of the person speaking.
Another invaluable exercise is to eliminate all attribution, and read the conversation. You should be able to tell just from the spoken words alone which character is talking. If they are not that distinctive, go back to the computer and redo them.
Personalizing Your Dialogue
There are many techniques to personalize your character’s words. The most basic may be his/her accent. This immediately tells us where he/she lives or lived in the past. The speech pattern you employ can reveal the economic or social status of the character. Is he/she vulgar? Does he/she use slang? Or speak with erudition using polysyllables and perhaps literary references?
One word of caution, however. Do not overuse any of these features. Overkill can turn off your reader. The proper balance is a very subjective decision that the writer can make instinctively if he/she knows the character thoroughly. (See the April 9 Charlie’s Choice two weeks ago on developing your characters.)
Another revealing technique is to have your character perform some task (I.E. doing something) while he/she is talking. This has a two-fold benefit. By selecting a task that represents your character’s interests you reveal additional information about him/her. The second benefit is making your character more real. Live people often speak while involved in an activity. How many times has your mother spoken to you while she cooks? We not only do this regularly, we also are quickly distracted by what we are doing.
Mimicking Real Speech
You have been in conversations when the other party is obviously distracted. Many times, eyes wander around the room while they talk with you. Frequently, one of the participants makes a comment totally detached from the subject you are discussing. Using the example of Mom’s conversation in the kitchen, you may suddenly interrupt, “Gosh, that smells so good. What are you making?” Or in a discussion of your progress in school, Mom may abruptly ask, “Did you clean your bedroom this morning?”
People also speak in fragmented sentences. Don’t feel compelled to complete every sentence or every phrase, particularly when your character is speaking excitedly. Conversely, a speaker often will pause, either collecting thoughts or reining in a wandering mind.
It is not necessary to have one person in a conversation always respond directly to the statements the other makes. How many times have you experienced a conversation in which the other party either doesn’t respond at all or abruptly blurts out, “I’m hungry” or some other irrelevant comment?
What all of this reminds you is that the thoughts of human beings do wander. They interrupt their conversation with sudden flashes of awareness. They may spot something that interests them. For example, you are walking along the path discussing politics when your companion suddenly remarks, “Did you see that red capped chickadee?
Or while walking, you unexpectedly remember that you were supposed to place a call to your friend John. You blurt out, “Oh shucks, I forgot to call John.” I know that when you reflect on conversations you have had or on times when you eavesdropped on someone else’s conversation, as so many good writers do, all of these techniques become realities.
Playing “Tag”
As we discuss the importance of making each character’s speech distinctive, let’s take a minute to look at the controversial question of “tags.” These are identifiers like “he said,” “he cried out,” “he whispered,” etc. Quality dialogue doesn’t require a tag on every statement to identify the speaker. The very nature of the speech pattern, all of the elements we spoke of above, should serve to tell the reader exactly who is speaking at any given moment.
But there are times, often in a group conversation when tags are very helpful to a reader trying to sort out the speakers. They also should be sprinkled through a two-person conversation to help with identification. Not every sentence can demonstrate the discrete nuances of a character’s speech.
Tags are also useful when the author wants to emphasize the emotion of a statement. When using a tag for this purpose, it is certainly preferable to try and select a verb that conveys the emotion you seek without relying on the assistance of an adjective or adverb. For example, “he exploded” portrays in a single word “he said angrily.” Even more important, using this action verb added a greater degree of excitement to the conversation.
Talking without Words
Never forget the useful tool of body language. You use it either consciously or inadvertently whenever you talk, and you learn much about the other party’s reaction to what you are saying by watching him/her.
Frankly, I personally dislike talking on the telephone. I can hear a person’s words, but I can’t really determine reactions without seeing that person. Body language is extremely revealing, and should be injected into your conversational patterns when you write.
You see from all of this that dialogue is an indispensable tool that has many functions in your fiction. It reveals a great deal about the person speaking. Used effectively, it can tell you much about the person being spoken to. It is also a useful tool for filling in background material that would be dull if presented in narrative form. You can use dialogue to describe the setting in which the conversation occurs very effectively without boring the reader. But do be cautious and use it judiciously whenever it is employed for descriptive purposes. Your dialogue must always move your story forward.
Practice these techniques I have given you and you will join the ranks of authors who write flawless dialogue and do it with ease.
Next week, we’ll move on from fiction and begin a series of columns on completing your nonfiction book. See you then. Keep writing!
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